hey readers this week in quarantine i will be doing finished and blog all create tasks this is my writing create task hope you enjoy
Tuesday, August 24, 2021
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Hi Cas
ReplyDeleteFunny Haiku poem. I'm hope you are not away from school forever!! Nice try but just check you last line (6 syllables).I hope you are keeping safe and well in lockdown, hopefully we will see you back at school soon. Michelle
Hi Cas
ReplyDeletegood to see you having a go at the Haiku you almost nailed it just like Michelle said one two many syllables. I'll have to check back to see how you tweaked it. Have a go at the tongue twister I used a dictionary to help me think if of lots of t words! G
Hi Cas, I hope we get to go back to school soon! :) I would like to see some more poems. Perhaps a countdown poem? I always enjoy writing those.
ReplyDeleteHave a nice day, Miss Ferguson
Hey Cas,
ReplyDeleteGosh, the teachers are so harsh! I will help you with the last line - just change I have to I've. That should do the trick :)
It was good to see you on Wednesday! Look forward to seeing you tomorrow for the quiz.
Hi Cas,
ReplyDeleteI hope your happy in your bubble! I liked your Haiku, and glad Mrs Lee could help you out with the last line, but I don't believe you have nothing to do, I bet you're keeping busy. I think you could maybe add a poem or two to your anthology, using what you have been doing as the topics.
I look forward to seeing some more poems :)